Okay so I’m gonna give a bit of a ‘disclaimer’ first.  Not that anything is offensive or whatever, cause who cares about that at this point, right?  Anyway, I just haven’t decided whether or not this will ‘definitely’ be the prologue to book 1 or not.  Also, I wanted a bit of input regarding various things… Do you like the way I wrote the Prologue?

I do want to make HCOP into actual books eventually.  However, I’m having a hard time deciding certain things.  For example: Should I have each arc be considered a ‘chapter’ and each chapter be considered a ‘part’?  Also, should I write ‘prologues’ like this one for each arc/super-chapter?  In that case, there would be another prologue before what is currently chapter 13.  If I do decide to do prologues for each arc/super-chapter, then should I write them from different character’s perspectives?  Sarah appears for the first time around chapter 13ish, so I might do the next prologue from her perspective…

Also, what’s your opinion on the edited chapter 1?  How much more editing does it need?  Well, whatever… Oh, btw, the prologue is in the MC’s perspective rofl.  This is not an autobiography lulz 😛 Continue reading →