Immortal Soul

Synopsis

Michael has been around a long time, a very long time. He has been reincarnated more times than he can possibly remember, and picked up a few tricks along the way. Intimately knowing Heaven, Hell, and pretty much everything in between, he was born into a fantasy world. Will he have a long happy life, or a disappointingly short and painful one? Either way, at least it should be entertaining.

[Warning: Contains graphic violence, nudity, mature content, some sexual content (In the later volumes), and relatively dark or crude humor!]

[Disclaimer: This is a fairly long story, and covers many controversial topics. It is almost entirely written in first person past perspective, and from multiple point of views. There are several “Main” characters, and each of them is significant to the plot.]

Immortal Soul can also be read on Tapas along with many other great fictions.

Copyright © Mike777ac 2014

This novel and all of its contents were written entirely by its author, Mike777ac.  It is an original product, and any attempt to plagiarize or steal concepts or ideas from it, shall be considered copyright infringement.

Many of the concepts and ideas have been inspired by other works, and similar genres.  However, all characters are created and owned by the author.

Table of Contents

Volume One: Black Mithril

Chapter 1: Reincarnation
Chapter 2: Resurrection
Chapter 3: The First Battle
Chapter 4: The Thief
Chapter 5: The Center of The World
Chapter 6: Hunting
Chapter 7: Headaches
Chapter 8: The Inventor
Chapter 9: Business
Chapter 10: Labyrinth
Chapter 11: The Sniper
Chapter 12: Rebirth

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41 thoughts on “Immortal Soul

  1. Were is volume 2,3 and 4? You need to update the Immortal Soul page btw. I think it might just be me, but I read up the part where Michael is with the tigress in the cave and killed the raptors, but I have no idea what volume that is and shit since there is only Volume 1 in the about page. Which is very confusing as you asay you have been updating lol XD. Anyway, if you could update the Immortal Soul page I would be thankful. Thx

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  2. you said “If you believe that rape or slavery is morally acceptable, you will not enjoy reading this story” that doesn’t make sense unless your trying to be funny?

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    • I’ve had people who argued with me that rape and slavery are perfectly fine and normal. So I have a disclaimer, which tells those people that they won’t like my story and not to bitch at me because of it lol. It’s not meant to be funny.

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  3. I love this series however i have some constructive criticism, though it might just be personal taste

    1. In the first arc when mike lost his mind going completely feral, it didnt really made sense that the story continued in first person narration. It would have been better if you swapped to a third person narration style. Infact this point bothered and distracted so much that i skipped over the whole part.
    2. This needs a bit better way to indicate a change of scene. There were some parts that didnt make sense to me until i realized that there was a change of scene. Something like a line or something would be nice.
    3.just a bit of a story idea for the future: the guys at white mythril or black mythril found a wealthy merchant that bought slaves to free them. Since the guy technically is a slaver, half of the group wants to execute him while the other wants to save him, creating internal strife.

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    • The first 2 volumes of Immortal Soul need a ton of revisions and revamps, not to mention lots and lots of editing lol. I started writing it a year ago, and yeah, I wanted to do everything in first-person perspective, mainly because I had just been writing “Harem Reaper” in third-person. However, Questing is all in third-person and so is the story that I’ve been working on for the past 3.5 months “Hardcore OP-ness” lol. To be completely honest, I agree with you that I should have done that part, and a lot of other parts, in third-person; when I go back eventually, I’ll definitely add in a bunch of 3rd person parts and replace some first person stuff with third person, I might even try to meld ‘Questing’ into the main story somehow.

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    • Btw, it’s nice to see someone actually give constructive criticism instead of just yelling “You suck, your writing is awful, I hate you, I hate your characters, go die!” and calling it constructive criticism lol.

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      • prob because they either didn’t care or came here from royalroadl , either or i found this site via aho-updates, granted I am a member of royalroadl its just i never found this story there mostly a case of ‘too many stories so some get missed’

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      • Yeah, I figured as much lol It doesn’t seem like there are that many Original stories on Aho, mostly just translations, so just by having HCOP on the list, I got a decent amount of new visitors and followers yesterday lol. Although, I’m not really sure what criteria Aho follows for their reblogs?

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      • pretty sure as long as it isnt licensed content [from unauthorised websites] then the skys the limit never seen them turn anything down unless the quality was total crap lol

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      • Well, it’s not like I asked them to put it up there, and they definitely didn’t ask me before they added me to their list lol. Which is why I was wondering, what their criteria for picking stories was rofl. Although, it’s probably because I’ve posted over 50 chapters and have been consistently posting like 3 a day for a few weeks now.

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      • someone else could have asked them to put it up but i dont know if it works like that or not since I never bothered with it.

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      • im too lazy to use bookmarks since i tend to forget about them, so i literally have 133 tabs open at this moment, before i had aho i had almost 200 [i had more back then cause i started to hoard ones that didn’t seem to update ;~; as well as the ones i later removed due to aho covering them]

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      • Wow, my computer will break if I just have ten of them open lol. Although, my computer might break just from turning it on, so maybe I just can’t comprehend having 133 tabs open. Actually, my OCD would prevent me from ever doing that rofl. Thus, I stick with bookmarks.

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