Chapter 5: Loneliness

When I was one-hundred and twenty-seven years old, I finally reached the sixth level of ‘Grrr~!’ or Qi Strengthening. My power had also surpassed the peak of the Red Realm: ninety-nine Bears. Continue reading

Chapter 4: A New Home

That was the first time that I had ever been struck by lightning. It hurt, a lot, but the temporary paralysis was the most dangerous factor. Continue reading

Immortal Soul?

Oh wow, I just realized how absurdly slow my reading speed is… It took me like 2 hours to read/edit this chapter.  6400 words is about 4.3 chapters of “Hardcore OP-ness” or “The Vanilla God”.  Seriously, “The Forest of Corruption” was like 16,200 words long… How the hell did I do that and why?  Ugh, when I eventually go back and edit “Immortal Soul” into actual books, I’m going to have to break a lot of the more ridiculously long chapters into smaller chapters lol.

I mean, I actually do have loads of ‘breaks’ within the chapter where I could have just been like “Yup, next chapter~!” but I didn’t.  The reason was probably because I felt like… guilt?  I thought that since I was taking so long to write the chapters, I should make them longer, which took more time, so it was pretty counter productive.

The moral of the story kids, is that when you’re writing, you shouldn’t let your leechers pressure you into doing things.  People weren’t even donating to me or anything, I was just trying to get ephemeral and immaterial ‘ratings’ on Royalroad, which never really amounted to anything either way.

You should write a story that you love and enjoy.  The more pressure, the harder it is to be creative :(.  Anyway, hopefully this little speech will help some of you writers out there…

So yeah, time to finally post “Chapter 11: Envy“… There’s no link cause I’ve still gotta post it lol.  It’ll take a few mins, but yeah, don’t expect “Chapter 12” any time soon :P.

(There actually is a link now roflmao.)

 

Chapter 22: Awakening

“What’s wrong with him?” Admiral Cain was wearing a skin-tight red t-shirt, along with black jeans and combat boots. Standing next to him was a five-foot tall, middle-aged woman, with long white hair, extremely pale skin, and lipstick that matched her crimson irises. Continue reading

Chapter 21: The Garden of Eden

“Nyah~, I can’t leave~! Wah~, Mikey~, why can’t I leave~?! I wanna go~! Let me go~!” An adorable little cat-girl was crying and whining, while clawing angrily at an ominous wooden door. Continue reading

Chapter 20: Entering Atlantis

Each of those submarines was shaped like a bullet on the outside, while the inside was closer to a very narrow but long elevator. However, rather than a fragile window, there were simply cameras on the outer hull, which had their displays projected onto the ceiling, walls and floor. Continue reading

Chapter 19: Evacuation

Fortunately, before the hospital spontaneously self-destructed, most of the patients, staff, and ‘guests’ within the building were evacuated to the ‘emergency shelter’. Rather than straight downward, the elevators in the basement were actually situated at a thirty-degree angle. Continue reading

Chapter 17: The Brain-Dead Immortal

“You’re certain he’s brain-dead?” An old man with wrinkles all over his face and dark-tan skin, was playing with his pure-white fumanchu moustache and staring at the beautiful doctor who was standing before him. He casually sat down upon his office chair and gazed out the window at the dark clouds in the sky. In Miami, thunderstorms were fairly common and could be easily disregarded, but hurricanes tended to be much more troublesome. Continue reading

Chapter 16: Hospitalization

Isabelle Krishna wasn’t the best neurosurgeon in the world, but she was certainly very close. However, she had an ‘unfair’ advantage over normal humans, because she was a Psycher. Continue reading